Adventure! w.i.p

disownedbeef

UPDATE: I have Made the cloth thicker to hopefully look less flat, added the gemstone, and made a bottle texture, filled with drinkable mana









Hey,
I'm working on a diorama involving a few real time characters to tell a little story
I'd love to have some c&c of what my progress so far, I'd like to push this to look as great as possible.
I'm gonna post lots of screenshots of progress along the way, thanks!
Also, I've been trying to explore possible colours for the outfit, I think an earthy green would suit well to her outfit, but I don't want peoples first thoughts to be that it resembles Link too much, what do you guys think?

evilplantosavetheworld

I think I have to say if you don't want first thoughts to be of Link it's not really working yet. Her tunic/dress is too similar as is the hood. Now I like the hood, personally, so I think I would change something about the tunic, maybe a big sash or something going over the shoulder like with a great kilt.

disownedbeef

Thanks @evilplantosavetheworld, I think you are totally right on the tunic. I'll explore some other options while I work on the other parts. I might make it a little more dress-like

razz

Hey this is looking nice. I agree with Evilplant, the hood is cool looking and actually is a very distinct feature of the character, so I'd keep that. I'd say it's hard to tell from the face alone if it's a boy or girl, but damn, who knows with those kids, it does look good though ;]

disownedbeef

Thanks razz! I've kept the hood like both of you said. I've tweaked the tunic a little bit to make it more of a dress, and to make her gender more obvious, as you pointed out! I've also began a little bit of texturing.










I feel like the cloth looks really flat but I'm unsure what to do with it

disownedbeef

I have updated the main post with the latest progress
I have Made the cloth thicker to hopefully look less flat, added the gemstone, and made a bottle texture, filled with drinkable mana