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WIP Cartoon Gladiator

Yay! My first "finalized" character hahahahaahah
i hope you guys like it, C&C are welcome :):)

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It took me 1 day until now, now its time to make the retopolgy, UVW and tad

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  • Markovnikov
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    Markovnikov polycounter lvl 6
    Well, someone has been skipping leg day.

    Honestly, the texture work is fine, but the model itself leaves a lot to be desired. Even though I know its suppsoed to be cartoony and thus exaggerate certain physical traits, the way you've done it isn't aesthetically pleasing at all. The face looks far too small for the head, as mentioned before the legs are pathetically small, and the arms look terribly bulbous.
  • Stavaas
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    Stavaas polycounter lvl 3
    I think he looks fine considering the style he's going for. Feels like he belongs in the Asterix and Obelix universe, like Maximus Gluteus' long lost brother!
  • fisher
    This is the principal reference for the shape, only the face I changed to training something more "realistic"

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    :))
  • Markovnikov
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    Markovnikov polycounter lvl 6
    Okay, that explains a lot. You probably should have kept the face the way it is in the concept (read; cartoonish) instead of going for realistic proportions. It just looks... wrong.
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