New Website!!! Critique?? :)

sci_mind

Hi everyone I made a new website and I would like some feedback on it. also does anyone know how to right a good cover letter? Thank you

Link: http://jackjoebeaw.wix.com/terrell3dart

Here's my old one for comparison: www.terrell3d.weebly.com

I will be updating the work with better pieces once I make them lol

Swarm22

A great cover letter starts with great grammar

Amatobahn

Your 'home' page should be removed and you should start off right in your gallery. Minimize the amount someone has to click to see your work. If it was me, I wouldn't want to take the time to figure out how something works, even if it is simple.

Look at your website like you are a potential employer. Making it easier for them makes it easier for you.

I also looked at your resume. Your summary line makes you sound like you'll take anything you can get even when it isn't what you want to do. I said something earlier this week in response to someone's tweet that was a similar case — It is in your best interest to focus on what you want to do most. It is okay to be picky. You want what you deserve, not what you can get.

PyrZern

I agree. Getting rid of the homepage. Not to mention the 3 rows on the left looks like menu; when they are actually not. Just go straight to your Gallery.

I think the info about your location should be in the Contact Page, which might not need the Email form... Do ppl even use them ?? I want a copy when I send an email aka I will use my gmail to send out a mail; not a fire and forget mailing form.