Something I'm working on for a contest need critique from you guys.

sagethethird

Need critique. (it's not done in the least I just want feedback.)

Anything you see that needs improvement. Let me know.

lotet

I think the pose and perspective of the main character is a bit wonky, esp the low angle and how the arms are kind of doing the robot.

also with the action lines you have at the moment the main focal point ends up somewhere in the groin area of ur main dude.

sagethethird

lotet wrote: »

I think the pose and perspective of the main character is a bit wonky, esp the low angle and how the arms are kind of doing the robot.

also with the action lines you have at the moment the main focal point ends up somewhere in the groin area of ur main dude.

it's a woman. but ok.


Otherwise ty for the advice.

lotet

sagethethird wrote: »

it's a woman. but ok.


Otherwise ty for the advice.

well that wasn't really clear for me so that's another crit then, make sure it looks like a woman =P

sagethethird

lotet wrote: »

well that wasn't really clear for me so that's another crit then, make sure it looks like a woman =P

I was going to disagree (on the basis I'm trying to make it look more creepy)

But I took your advice and it looks far creepier with more feminine features.

I'm going to keep rendering this and post the results. lol

ty again.