IceMonster Attack

Bhelir

Hello!

Here's an animation i'm working on, this is an ice monster i've created for my final year project.

Feel free to share comments and critics, I must improve myself while looking for an internship.

here's my attack animation and monster :

3/4 view
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/60789153/3_4view.mov

front view
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/60789153/frontview.mov

side view
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/60789153/sideview.mov

AcTTooN

good job man.

-i think all body parts moving in the same time.
-also he need to slow in and out when in the air.
-he's also ski a bit in the end.

slipsius

Yup yup. Everything is moving at the same time. Very pose to pose. Try and get some overlap in there. have body parts drag and follow through.

Your jumps need to be retimed. They are way too fast right now. Especially the second one.

The jumps need to be re-posed as well. The first jump, he lands on all four legs at the same time. throw his butt up in the air and have his hind legs hit after the front ones do. Definitely check out some reference for this. Tigers or dogs. Anything with 4 legs. Find reference and really examine how they jump. How their feet come off the ground when they jump, and how they hit the ground when they land.

f154 to f160, he goes to jump, but his hind legs slide forward (from the side view). those feet shouldnt slide at all. plant them. same with when he lands. slides at the end.

Bhelir

Roger!

I'll work on this, thanks for your feedback!