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First 3D Character

Tarek3D
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Hello guys
how you doing? :)
i guess this is my first post in here
i wanna show u my first 3d low-poly character

and for more additional images on behance :D

https://www.behance.net/gallery/27904563/Low-Poly-Game-Character
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tell me your critiques

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  • lildragn
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    lildragn polycounter lvl 17
    First ever character? If so well done man... need a bigger pic for proper crits, but nice efforts here.
  • CharacterCarl
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    CharacterCarl greentooth
    Hey,

    you did a good job on the clothes. The folds look convincing to me and I also dig his color scheme.
    His head looks a bit too big, though. Also his fingers might need to be longer from what I can tell, or just the hands in general. I always like to see what it looks like when a character puts a hand to his face for comparison. Try it.
    Also note that the perspective might be a bit deceptive here. Because there's no floor (grid) or other type of environment I can't tell exactly what the FOV is. So it might be that the things I pointed out aren't that much of a deal after all on a lower FOV.

    Also, eyelashes.;)
  • Danger_Sideburns
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    Danger_Sideburns polycounter lvl 7
    Looks boss for a first try, dude. Keep at it!
  • Tarek3D
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    Tarek3D null
    yup guys that's my first character
    DerRazputin you're right about what u said about the sizes
    about eyelashes sounds like he suffers from cancer :v :D
    in the behance link u will find more pictures and a close pic of the face
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