desert traveler and dweller

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working on two characters for personal work to add to my portfolio wanted some critique to know thought if i should go for more realism or stylized and opinions and ideas to make them interesting anything helps and thanks for looking


http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn174/Spenser_Pyle/dweller%20back_zpsgpavfsfp.jpg

kanga

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thanks a lot kanga will do still new to posting thanks for the adivice

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small update to character

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another gradual update on my buffering beast looking for opinions and advice and general thoughts on the character and design

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short update been adding asymmetrical detail and what not always looking for feed back on the character and what is and isn't working

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still looking for feed back added a few grass vines and roots to him wanted opinions if its to much or just right, and removed lip detail seeing if less is more planning to head toward colors and finishing soon thanks if your able to take a look

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started texturing the character and seeing what works just looking for any suggestions or comments on if the scheme is ok or if i should change it

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just another post been working on textures and and small detail things just wanted feedback to know if its close to something i can put on a reel or if should keep it as just personal and focus other things that would a studios style . also areas i need to improve to qualify for working in studios any feed back is appreciated

willehrendreich

didn't know what to think of this one, until i saw the renders from today, and im totally charmed now. lol. i like him.

pigart

He's from the desert yet he is covered in green vines and leaves. Seems kind of strange.

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thanks willehrendreich took a while but now i think i just got to pose and tweak a bit

pigart
yeah he not from the dessert originally i had a second character in my first post that was but i focused on the dweller so i guess the titles confusing now ha

VanderKuil

Stylish and cool model.Like!

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thanks alot VanderKuil

Robert_H

I think he looks great, I how think the little grass stalk sticking out if in a silhouette or un-textured can look a bit rude at first just because of where it it. But i think textured he looks incredible really great design!

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thanks a lot Robert_H good feed back, glad you like it

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did a simple pose and a small environment for the character just looking for info on things to improve the textures and renders for a turntable any comments or suggestion would be welcome