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Sniper Concept

One of my personal projects. Modeled in 3dsmax, rendered in Keyshot.

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  • OFPismySOP
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    OFPismySOP polycounter lvl 6
    Could you post some shots of the gun from less extreme angles? It's hard to make out a lot of details because of how you took the pictures.
  • Digimush
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    Digimush polycounter lvl 3
    What is the purpose of this blue light? If it has no use, then it is bad, because a sniper should stay hidden, but the light could help spot him.
  • 3dReaper
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    3dReaper polycounter lvl 4
    Take less "artistic" shots and more easy to read renders.

    Your materials do not read well, at least to me. The gun looks so perfect yet you have scratches (dents?) on the barrel. Part of this is because of your extreme screen shot angles, the dark background, and the lack of some details in the material. It seems like you used the same detail normal map across the whole gun or at least most of the gun.

    Also bullets are not all the same material. It looks like you made the shell and bullet extreme polished brass.

    use a hosting service for your images, so many posters recently have been attaching renders instead of using say Imgur as an easier way for the forum to view your work.

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