dem0 reel deal

spenser.p

looking for critique and ways to improve on my old demo reel and website to get my first job so please tell me what you think. in most projects i use zbrush and maya i defintly want to do character modeling but i am not sure how to push myself to the next level as far my style and polish to make everything more interesting

http://conkersp.wix.com/spenserpyledesign
[ame]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FLYfo8zNxBk[/ame]

spenser.p

thank you if you were able to take a look love it hate all take any advice on my quest to be the best

spenser.p

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjGhVK9xT6k&feature=youtu.be

3dReaper

Read this:
http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=39516

and these other helpful links:
http://wiki.polycount.com/wiki/Portfolio

Wix is notorious for being a generally crappy website for portfolios. Scrap it. Go with art station or the like. Your portfolio is too busy.

HR, Art Leads, and most people in general want to see your art immediately. Demo reels are better suited for animators and VFX artists, again generally. Some people like them, I do not. Your projects should be front facing first and foremost.

Are you vying for a 3d art gig? Focus solely on that content and scrap all else. Your images are named "Untitled/IMG" looks very unprofessional. Also your about page has minor typos and inconsistencies which look unprofessional.

spenser.p

thanks for your help reaper ill definitely take your advice check out art station, also thanks for the info on my presentation so i can refine everything and clean up to get a 3d art gig,

if there's anything else give me a heads up and have a great day

spenser.p

Made a quick art station site to scrap the wix any feed back is appreciated https://www.artstation.com/artist/spenserp