Game Res Character Work in Progress

E4sY

I've been working on this character and wanted to get some feedback on it's progression.

Here is the first picture.

TheWalkerGod

Her arms and shoulder seem too narrow, especially since her torso appears so wide (could be just the angle the picture was taken though). Also, her pelvis, especially around the crotch seems too wide and flat, and the crease in the pants at her crotch seems really weird. More images at different angles would make critique easier, and if you're using concept art or some other kind of reference you should post that as well.

PyrZern

Any concept or idea for this character ??

But just for my taste (which some say is a bit twisted), her shoulders seem pretty wide. And you lost the silhouette of her waist. Her hands look very masculine and the jacket's sleeves should reach her wrists; if not cover them.

E4sY

Thanks for observations. I'll look into the area's mentioned with the next update.

E4sY

Here is an update. Here is an update. Im starting up work on a weapon harness. That is what you see on the right upper leg

E4sY

Here is some more progression on the character. I mainly worked on the weapon harness.

E4sY

Here is a small update where I've started to work on the coat details.

Brian "Panda" Choi

Who is she supposed to be?  Or, who is she as a person?  

The folds overall are making good progress.  I'd double check how female leather jackets fold in the front again, since the flow lines from the breast line seem a bit too exaggerated.