Her arms and shoulder seem too narrow, especially since her torso appears so wide (could be just the angle the picture was taken though). Also, her pelvis, especially around the crotch seems too wide and flat, and the crease in the pants at her crotch seems really weird. More images at different angles would make critique easier, and if you're using concept art or some other kind of reference you should post that as well.
But just for my taste (which some say is a bit twisted), her shoulders seem pretty wide. And you lost the silhouette of her waist. Her hands look very masculine and the jacket's sleeves should reach her wrists; if not cover them.
Who is she supposed to be? Or, who is she as a person?
The folds overall are making good progress. I'd double check how female leather jackets fold in the front again, since the flow lines from the breast line seem a bit too exaggerated.
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But just for my taste (which some say is a bit twisted), her shoulders seem pretty wide. And you lost the silhouette of her waist. Her hands look very masculine and the jacket's sleeves should reach her wrists; if not cover them.
The folds overall are making good progress. I'd double check how female leather jackets fold in the front again, since the flow lines from the breast line seem a bit too exaggerated.