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Working on some pieces for my portfolio for Intake assignment.
Really hope I get in!
I still have allot 2 learn:thumbup:

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  • Brian "Panda" Choi
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    Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range
    Do you have additional angles for screenshots?

    From just the given screenshots, it's really head to differentiate where the wing webbing starts, or where the physical fingers, etc. begin. Given the texturing, there's no areas of focus or lack there of. the uniformity of the blotches, highlights, and local color make it all blend together. What only stands out is the head, but that's because of the stark white teeth and the emissive eyes.

    I would say give the webbing a different material. Look at bats and existing creatures that have webbing for flight purposes, and see how they are differentiated away from the main body.
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