Ancient God Cemetery [Unity5]

JeyDia

Hi everybody,

I wanted to share with you my first open environnement in Unity5









I will upload a free camera build and Video soon

Arstation Screenshots : https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ancient-god-cemetery-unity5

JeyDia

The video :

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Ged

did you make all the assets? the planets in the sky dont fit in very well, look a bit stuck on and flat.

JeyDia

Ged wrote: »

did you make all the assets? the planets in the sky dont fit in very well, look a bit stuck on and flat.

Except the rocks and planets

samwoodart

It would be cool to flesh out the story the environment is telling a little more. Right now I'm a little confused to what those structures are and what they are meant to be doing. Secondly, the scene is quite poor compositionally. Try using the Rule of Thirds, ect, to guide the audiences eye a little more. Otherwise, great start,

JeyDia

samwoodart wrote: »

It would be cool to flesh out the story the environment is telling a little more. Right now I'm a little confused to what those structures are and what they are meant to be doing. Secondly, the scene is quite poor compositionally. Try using the Rule of Thirds, ect, to guide the audiences eye a little more. Otherwise, great start,

Didn't know this thing ( Rule of Thirds ) thank you, it will help me for the next thing

Grandma

how did you make them rocksm they look nice

Shrike

looks cool but the bright pics are extremely bright and I have a very dark monitor
The big planet look kind of strange and skewed , also has too much of a focus imo