Great start man, try to stay as low as possible to really try and get those major plane shifts down before adding too much detail. Also note that the sternocleidomastoid has a bit more stretch from the skull to the clavicle. Keep it up!
Thanks RitualSynergY, I'll try to go back on lower subdivision and straighten out the planes of the face. Those pictures helped visualize things better. Thanks!
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