LM-17 - An Star Wars gun!

TheKlu

Hello everyone!
This is my first serious work on Substance Painter.
I'm looking for critics to improve, What have done wrong? Please let me know

Ok here we go:









Thanks for help me

Ged

looks pretty good to me, can you post your reference? the wear may be a bit too uniform, especially on that piece above the handle

james01

TheKlu wrote: »

Hello everyone!

I'm looking for critics to improve, What have done wrong? Please let me know

Doesn't look like there is high poly bake, it could really use one.
Some UV seams are visible.
Also, switch off depth of field when presenting artwork for crit.

TheKlu

Ged wrote: »

looks pretty good to me, can you post your reference? the wear may be a bit too uniform, especially on that piece above the handle

Thanks you! I'll look at that. This was the main reference:



But i was creating "my own weapon", didn't meant to be same :P

TheKlu

james01 wrote: »

Doesn't look like there is high poly bake, it could really use one.
Some UV seams are visible.
Also, switch off depth of field when presenting artwork for crit.

Ok thanks you! That really helped me!
I'll look to improve those ^^

AxtelSturnclaw

From a utility standpoint, the grip looks unusable. Consider how a hand would fit, and look at your reference. Think about how you would reach the trigger, and how that metal flange would feel digging into your palm.

From a texturing standpoint, there's nothing I am qualified to say other than think about toning down the large edge wear slightly.

TheKlu

AxtelSturnclaw wrote: »

From a utility standpoint, the grip looks unusable. Consider how a hand would fit, and look at your reference. Think about how you would reach the trigger, and how that metal flange would feel digging into your palm.

From a texturing standpoint, there's nothing I am qualified to say other than think about toning down the large edge wear slightly.

Okay thanks you!

Legion_studios

grip facing backwards it is (yoda voice ends here)

other wise good job

TheKlu

Legion_studios wrote: »

grip facing backwards it is (yoda voice ends here)

other wise good job

Hahaha, thanks you ^^

Texelion

"It's not a gun, it's a blaster." - Han Solo ( no, he never said that ).

I think you should do the whole thing ( it's a DH-17 blaster pistol according to wikia, LM-17 doesn't seem to exist ) instead of just a part of it. Would look better.