asian girl (my second character) (NSFW)
polycounter lvl 5
Nothing specific, just an asian girl. This is my second character (first one is here: http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149765 ), so critiques are very much appreciated. 
Here's how it looks like in Marmoset Toolbag.
I feel like something's off but can't point it out exactly.
Here's how it looks like in Marmoset Toolbag.
I feel like something's off but can't point it out exactly.
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Maybe a little more hip action/thigh action. Lips would be nice.
I provided 2 images that might help:
Profile view:
http://previews.123rf.com/images/yupiramos/yupiramos1006/yupiramos100600099/7267790-Beuaty-girl-profile-praying-over-white-background-Stock-Photo-child.jpg
Frontal view:
http://hairstylesweekly.com/images/2012/12/Popular-Short-Wavy-Hairstyle-for-Office-Female.jpg
When you look at the profile view I immediately thought the nose was an issue on your model, the slope seems longer than in the reference. I don't know what ref you used so i provided my own.
The lip length also might be a issue (frontal view).
Hope that helped.
original on the left. edit on the right.
I'd also darken the hazelnut colored eyes a bit, not completely black but a more subtler color would be better suited.
Are you using any facial references of a person? They will be really helpful.