Looking for feedback on several dota items

danee

Hey Guys, I just wanted to post this thread here to get some feedback for some items I created.
You will be ❤❤appreciated❤❤ if you can give me some suggestions on the concept/texture/chartlet or else！
I will refine it according to your opinion.

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Please see the links below.
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=459135473&tscn=1434361128

Alpha Wolf of Nightsilver

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=450831314

Azureant

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=450844081

Dragon Instrument

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439390620

Shattered Bottle

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439384716

Tyrannofish Hat

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439383437


Blade of Bloodthirst

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439378170

Scythe of the Rhaven

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439376777

Wing of the Deep

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439374202

Hellish Aspect

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439371378

Mask of Immolator

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439367287

Light Devourer

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439354101


Wings of Unholy Runes

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439361599

Totem of Stone Lotus

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439363900

Emerald Staff

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439369996

Frostwing

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439379334

Amethyst Crown

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439381495

Staff of Censer
http://imgur.com/ZcXaeGz
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=439386327

Silver Cutlass
http://imgur.com/WluPL0o
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=440995583




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http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=459135473&tscn=1434361128

danee

Please help me~
Really need opinions~

Vayne4800

Aren't you the one who posted with DAC2015 nickname? Are you affiliated with them? As for the items, half of them look great.

danee

Just partnership.
Thanks for your reply!
I will refine them according to your opinion.

HeadCrabD

danee wrote: »

Just partnership.
Thanks for your reply!
I will refine them according to your opinion.

id like to refine the "Azureant" would you? just send me the concept. i can remodel them

danee

HeadCrabD wrote: »

id like to refine the "Azureant" would you? just send me the concept. i can remodel them

sorry but I have a partner who helps me modeling，I cant fire him:(
I will appreciate if you could give me advice！

Potm

im not sure if you are DAC2015 , or another person who is partnership with him....but


im always a fan with your drawing (the one who drew the design), you have amazing amazing art, like the Mirana set in game with that loading screen, i love it so much and wish to have it someday.

HOWEVER, you also ruined Mirana with the model you made, im a mirana lover, and im not happy with how it ends up. the quality of the model is lacking, as well as the texture.

and this apply to the mirana mount u have made in this list, the drawing and concept looks nice and well done, but once becomes in 3d version, it is just so bad ;(

danee

Potm wrote: »

im not sure if you are DAC2015 , or another person who is partnership with him....but


im always a fan with your drawing (the one who drew the design), you have amazing amazing art, like the Mirana set in game with that loading screen, i love it so much and wish to have it someday.

HOWEVER, you also ruined Mirana with the model you made, im a mirana lover, and im not happy with how it ends up. the quality of the model is lacking, as well as the texture.

and this apply to the mirana mount u have made in this list, the drawing and concept looks nice and well done, but once becomes in 3d version, it is just so bad ;(

Thank you so much
we will refine the 3dmodel of the mirana mount!

Godzy

Mirana mount - the whole concept is a bit lacking (Considering how many other great mirana mounts have been added over time, this one doesn't stand out at all). The model doesn't look that great either but that wouldn't be the main problem with it imo.

Treants - I honestly like the idea behind those but the textures are a bit lacking as well. The leafs blend in too much with the rest of the body (and imo some particle wouldve looked better than the current leafs)

Ward - I like the design overall but i think it would look too small ingame (can't really say exactly since you didn't add any game view shots)

Tide Bottle - It would've been nice if it had some suble/creative particles with it

Tide Hat - too noisy/pointy for my tastes. silhouette could be ok i guess

Qop Dagger - Personally i feel that the dagger slot is the least interesting slot she has. Unless you are going to do something nice and unique for her, it's going to end up as "another small dagger that nobody will notice"

Necro Weapon - same as the mirana mount. i would rather replace than fix this one

Morph Back - great silhouette but: http://dota2.gamepedia.com/Luminary_of_the_Dreadful_Abyss_Set

Lion Head - Looks ok. If i had any complain on it i would say that the model is kinda flat

Jug Head - Reminds me of the old jug heads. the biggest problem about it is that the spikes which were supposed to pop out the silhouette blend in too much with the fur

CK Weapon - Nothing spectacular

Doom Wings - Really poor execution. It might also be a bit noisy on the flaming bits but the biggest flaw would be the model itself

Es Totem - Looks ok but I think the UV could've been a lot better. The textures don't look that sharp (and the guy has 512x256 texture res damnit)

Kunkka Stick - I find it a bit pointless tbh
Sven Sword - Not sure what to say about this one. It's not on my favorite list but its not completely bad either

Slardar hat - nope


I didn't vote because I don't like hidden results.

danee

Godzy wrote: »

Mirana mount - the whole concept is a bit lacking (Considering how many other great mirana mounts have been added over time, this one doesn't stand out at all). The model doesn't look that great either but that wouldn't be the main problem with it imo.

Treants - I honestly like the idea behind those but the textures are a bit lacking as well. The leafs blend in too much with the rest of the body (and imo some particle wouldve looked better than the current leafs)

Ward - I like the design overall but i think it would look too small ingame (can't really say exactly since you didn't add any game view shots)

Tide Bottle - It would've been nice if it had some suble/creative particles with it

Tide Hat - too noisy/pointy for my tastes. silhouette could be ok i guess

Qop Dagger - Personally i feel that the dagger slot is the least interesting slot she has. Unless you are going to do something nice and unique for her, it's going to end up as "another small dagger that nobody will notice"

Necro Weapon - same as the mirana mount. i would rather replace than fix this one

Morph Back - great silhouette but: http://dota2.gamepedia.com/Luminary_of_the_Dreadful_Abyss_Set

Lion Head - Looks ok. If i had any complain on it i would say that the model is kinda flat

Jug Head - Reminds me of the old jug heads. the biggest problem about it is that the spikes which were supposed to pop out the silhouette blend in too much with the fur

CK Weapon - Nothing spectacular

Doom Wings - Really poor execution. It might also be a bit noisy on the flaming bits but the biggest flaw would be the model itself

Es Totem - Looks ok but I think the UV could've been a lot better. The textures don't look that sharp (and the guy has 512x256 texture res damnit)

Kunkka Stick - I find it a bit pointless tbh
Sven Sword - Not sure what to say about this one. It's not on my favorite list but its not completely bad either

Slardar hat - nope


I didn't vote because I don't like hidden results.

Thank you so much!
You are awesome！

danee

Potm wrote: »

im not sure if you are DAC2015 , or another person who is partnership with him....but


im always a fan with your drawing (the one who drew the design), you have amazing amazing art, like the Mirana set in game with that loading screen, i love it so much and wish to have it someday.

HOWEVER, you also ruined Mirana with the model you made, im a mirana lover, and im not happy with how it ends up. the quality of the model is lacking, as well as the texture.

and this apply to the mirana mount u have made in this list, the drawing and concept looks nice and well done, but once becomes in 3d version, it is just so bad ;(

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=450831314
how about the refine one?