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Jun 2015
Hi, this is my first time uploading something. Really appreciate some feedback.
Modeled in 3DS Max, Mental Ray. Made this model for my 3D exam.
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Lucky17
Jun 2015
Hello it's a pretty nice job,could you explain how create lights and textures.Ty
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Jun 2015
First render I used a 3 point lightning setup (skyportal) and the other 2 I used a 1 Skyportal on top. For the textures I used a composite map for the body/stickers.
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SonicBlue
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Jun 2015
There are some parts that needs to be fixed.
The headlights looks like they have a different shape.
The vents on the hood are extruded outward, look at the pictures.
The hood itself needs to be cut and separated from the main body, near the windshield wipers.
The doors are curved, not flat
The part on the tail starts and the vents ends, needs to be flattened.
The actual shape of the front is different, looks at the sharp edge on the pictures.
You need to gather more references pictures of the actual car the make a more precise work.
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Jun 2015
thx for the feedback! will work these things out
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The headlights looks like they have a different shape.
The vents on the hood are extruded outward, look at the pictures.
The hood itself needs to be cut and separated from the main body, near the windshield wipers.
The doors are curved, not flat
The part on the tail starts and the vents ends, needs to be flattened.
The actual shape of the front is different, looks at the sharp edge on the pictures.
You need to gather more references pictures of the actual car the make a more precise work.