couch feedback appreciated

nelson_press

ive been working on this couch

and i guess its not much howver all the same id appreciate the feedback

i dunno i thought that it might be too plain or the details weren't properly defined or something

i wanted to put it in a cafe, like a coffee shop for an animation incase the purpose was important







i was thinking about turning the textures into an alpha mask and bumping out the leather texture but maybe that isnt necessary and maybe that would destroy what little texture definitions i currently have

skodone

i think usually the top pillow and the seating pillow are separate parts, i would strongly advis you to model them separately too

also the pillows lack variety in form

see how the pillows have a slight round form even if theyre quite straight? because theyre usually stuffed to some extent the bulk to the center
also your folds seem a bit random

what kind of reference did you use?
you can also add seams and so on for further detailing and then if the sculpt is all well you can creat a low poly
with a normal map so you won tneed a bump but you can do one if you like, and then work on the textures