I would suggest posing the model with a bit more of a lean to the rear. In the last render you showed it looks like it wants to tip over since its center of gravity appears to be more forward of center.
Also, you have such good detail on most of the model but you seemed to have left the back pack thing pretty much untouched. It also looks like the pixel density for that part of the model is a lot less than on other parts of the mech.
^ Also the forms don't seem very readable at least to me.
It blends together for me, I would add selective color scheming that can make areas pop.
I usually like working with 3 colors, and right now you have 1 solid color around the entire model.
With the other C&C this should be enough to get going on sorting the issues out and returning to us with the update. Good luck.
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I would suggest posing the model with a bit more of a lean to the rear. In the last render you showed it looks like it wants to tip over since its center of gravity appears to be more forward of center.
Also, you have such good detail on most of the model but you seemed to have left the back pack thing pretty much untouched. It also looks like the pixel density for that part of the model is a lot less than on other parts of the mech.
Other than that I like it! Great work so far.
It blends together for me, I would add selective color scheming that can make areas pop.
I usually like working with 3 colors, and right now you have 1 solid color around the entire model.
With the other C&C this should be enough to get going on sorting the issues out and returning to us with the update.
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