Car model and abandoned gas station for critique

Batou

Hello everyone, I'm creating a series of game models to make a portfolio and I'd like to show them to more experienced people as I'm working on them to make sure they're as good as I can make them.

High Poly model for normals etc.



High Poly model with isoline display



This is the blockout for the environment where the car will be sitting in.



[sketchfab]c5f1313a3cfc4211b4ffbacb3f7a1fcf[/sketchfab]
Dodge by batou on Sketchfab



Any critique, advice or comment is apreciated. Thanks.

BubblegumTate

I highly suggest giving the gas station a feature that really breaks up the silhouette and is also a distinct marker. It doesn't have to be as extreme as Kentucky Route Zero but should really pop out and grab attention. It can be themed or just a cool large sign.

Even if it's a background piece, this sort of thing can really take a good shot and make it great, as the viewer can lean in and take in the entire atmosphere.

Batou

That's a great suggestion, some ideas are starting to pop into my mind thanks.

Batou

Been under some time constraints but got a bit more work done on the car. Feedback is welcome

Batou

Hey everyong it's been a while, only had time to work on this project recently so here's my latest let me know what you think.

Low poly (12k triangles) 4092x4092 game asset PBR in Substance painter.

Earthyn

Oh loving how rusted it came out, my suggestion would be to work on the metallic map as the rust is extremely shiny right now!

clinington

Car looks nice but the rust looks a little random and also way too shiny! I think that the rust would usually be more brown and the car (if it is abandoned too) would be covered in dust etc and not reflect that much light in general. Maybe you could have some smashed headlights and bits hanging off etc to push it that little bit further. Just a suggestion

Batou

Thanks for the feedback guys I'll see what I can do.