Young Adventurer - WIP - Critique Appreciated

crazy

I am currently working on a stylized young female character. I am also looking for some helpful critique. I'd like to improve as much as I can. Thanks!

TheWalkerGod

Her arms need work. I've never seen anyone with an indent in there arm like that. I think you were trying to create what's called the antecubital fossa with those indents, but they don't look like that. Also her arms don't really seem to have any muscle definition and look way too scrawny considering the rest of her body looks average sized. The toes obviously are finished, but I assume that's because you're going to put shoes on her. Make sure next time you get the proportions down before you start doing things like clothes and hair.

At any rate, it looks like you got a good start here, although at the moment she doesn't really strike me as an adventurer of any sort.

crazy

TheWalkerGod wrote: »

Her arms need work. I've never seen anyone with an indent in there arm like that. I think you were trying to create what's called the antecubital fossa with those indents, but they don't look like that. Also her arms don't really seem to have any muscle definition and look way too scrawny considering the rest of her body looks average sized. The toes obviously are finished, but I assume that's because you're going to put shoes on her. Make sure next time you get the proportions down before you start doing things like clothes and hair.

At any rate, it looks like you got a good start here, although at the moment she doesn't really strike me as an adventurer of any sort.

Thanks for the reply! You're totally right, she's lacking a lot of definition. I kind of jumped ahead, I really wanted to mess with cloth. I am going to go back and fill out the arms and fix the other issues you mentioned. I do plan to cover up most of her skin, but having those proportions locked down underneath will be helpful.

As far as her look, I have some accessories in mind that will hopefully give her more of an adventurer feel.

I had a hell of a time trying to sculpt the eyes. I feel like I've looked at them too much, and don't trust my judgement. Is there anything there that makes you think "why did he do that?"

TheWalkerGod

crazy wrote: »

Thanks for the reply! You're totally right, she's lacking a lot of definition. I kind of jumped ahead, I really wanted to mess with cloth. I am going to go back and fill out the arms and fix the other issues you mentioned. I do plan to cover up most of her skin, but having those proportions locked down underneath will be helpful.

As far as her look, I have some accessories in mind that will hopefully give her more of an adventurer feel.

I had a hell of a time trying to sculpt the eyes. I feel like I've looked at them too much, and don't trust my judgement. Is there anything there that makes you think "why did he do that?"

Nothing stands out to me as wrong when it comes to the eye, at least not right now. Her lower eyelid doesn't seem very pronounced but their are people like that so it isn't really a problem. Oh yeah, next time you can upload your images to IMGUR or something and than paste your brb code. That will the images will automatically show up when people look at your thread, rather than them having to click on a link.