Creature Bust - Constructive Criticism Needed

Craigo

Hello guys, This is my first post on this site, I'm looking to get some CC on my university work. The project is a high poly bust of a creature and this is what I have so far, Looking for some feedback on how I can improve.

pangarang

Probably post a concept or target that you're trying to hit first. This is too underdeveloped (for me, anyway) to form an opinion on.

iNathanM

Looking really cool so far! As an idea for the head, something like the roughness on the images head here;

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/040/6/a/demon_creature_sculpt_by_redandblack25-d4p63f7.jpg

may look kind of cool, and add some more depth to the head?

Liking the look of the body as well as the overall look of the head and heck. Good work keep up the progress

Craigo

Thanks for the feedback guys,

Dont really have a concept I'm running off but am trying to do it in the style of the monsters you see in the Evolve game. So for example like this:

http://compass.xbox.com/assets/9b/83/9b8322c6-cef0-4fe7-b4f5-0183e2555078.png?n=evolve_monsters_960x530_02.png

Hope this gives a better image of what I'm trying to aim for