Early Sci Fi Corridor Critique

CrazyMan09

I am creating a sci fi corridor based on the original nostromo concepts.

Its still kinda early but please critique. I have included a screenshot and then an edited version with things I want to improve. So feel free to add any suggestions. The fog particle was purchased off the marketplace.

nickcomeau

It's hard to see what's going on really because of the angle of the screenshot. I'd try taking one that shows off your assets better.