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I need some dedicated critiques for my upcoming game

Dustinnb
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Dustinnb
Hey guys,

I'm making a video game and I'm posting all the time lapses and everything onto YouTube for criticism but I want more critiques.
Here is the link ..> https://www.youtube.com/user/MuchBadSS

Cheers,
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  • AtticusMars
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    AtticusMars greentooth
    Do you have a gameplay video?
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  • Dustinnb
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    Dustinnb
    AtticusMars wrote: »
    Do you have a gameplay video?

    At the end of my recent time lapse videos I show In-game footage. Which are the assets thrown quickly into Unity. I am not at the stage of having actual game play.
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  • lotet
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    lotet hero character
    Hi there! I dont wanna be that guy, but this is not actually a game (not yet at least), its just a bunch of art assets, so I can only judge it as that.

    I think it looks okay, its not bad, but its nothing amazing either. I also think the outline either needs to go, or get thicker, right now its looks kind of "unity default"

    I would suggest to post screenshots and stuff on the 3D Art Showcase & Critiques section, where you can get proper crits on the art

    good luck!
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  • Joebewon
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    Joebewon polycounter lvl 12
    Hey Dustin,

    Your stuff looks pretty fun! But as lotet mentioned, it's not really much of a game! You should probably try to get at least a rough feel of a first level before asking for game crits.

    Good luck and looking forward to seeing what you come up with!
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