Environments!(Need Critiques.. basically help :D)

arvin

Hi I created this image base on an image I saw here on polycount but I want to make deviate from the original so I am gonna ask you guys on how I can improve my work:) thanks in advance! yeah.. it's still WIP :P

Mr Significant

Hmmm, there is shit tone of work to do here. First of all is it marmoset ?

The rocks: Its looks like you've made one rock, and you copied it over and over. No texture or color variation. They are flat. Its not only on normal map side.

http://www.cgtextures.com/texview.php?id=52898&PHPSESSID=v2a9k4njqguljqoars2bku6kq2

Some green, maybe even via vertex paint. Just dont put grey alone in there. I cant find better pic right now.

Grass is too damn dark. And its sticking out of terrain. Try to set normals of the plane in your 3d application to "up".

[ame]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_kONIPr_gBM[/ame]

But albedo/diffuse must be brighter.

Third, and most important: some point of interest. For now, the point of my interest is background :P DoF that you have on further terrain could be removed. DoF is being used on great distances, mostly.

Subbed. Lets see where you can drive this.