My Animation Reel

Ankitanime

hi..

here is my animation reel.

[ame]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f7CPZQIVEaw[/ame]


let me know what you guys think.

Thanks

SuperSoupy

Looking good!

Some really nice stuff here, I've had to really dig into it just to find some crit so that's a sure sign that you're onto a winner! The hore run is super and so is your running/knife chop combo segment!

Here are a couple of points that i caught while viewing it:

- The end 'finisher' on the sword battle at the end of the reel could use some polish on those poses. In particular exaggerate the victor's killing blow pose and it currently looks too rigid.

- The guy at the computer. After the file lands on his desk, I'm not understanding the long look he gives following it. Not sure what it is you're trying to sell here. Maybe a few more breakdowns will help?

- The skateboarder is mostly a great bit. After he lands an ollie, I'd suggest that you give him a bit more weight to sell that jump. Move his hips up/down a bit more for added weight.


Liking this a lot though! A touch more polish and you've got a damn fine reel here!

EVernier

I like it, except maybe for the Stewart sword fight. It feels very floaty. The rest is pretty cool, I really like the first bit with the skateboard.