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JasonHeckmen
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JasonHeckmen polycounter lvl 8
Delete please.

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  • BradMyers82
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    BradMyers82 interpolator
    no... ;) Your edges look a lot sharper then in the reference. There are a lot of subtle things I think you are missing, and the lighting in your render isn't the greatest. I see a lot of cloudy color variation in your reference and slight grunge. All your edges are pretty scrapped up, where in the reference its much more subtle and done mainly in the spec map/ gloss. Id also push the green more towards yellow as well. Its a solid start, but still needs a lot more love imo. Keep at it!

    edit// oh and the painted text in your reference is by far the coolest part. Def. try to acheive that look. right now you clearly just have typed text and its not even masked
  • BradMyers82
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    Really? lol. I guess I wasted my time then.
  • JasonHeckmen
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    JasonHeckmen polycounter lvl 8
    No you didn't. I was posting for a friend whose net wasn't working. He ended up making a thread without seeing this one. I showed him your feedback.
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