Looking for some feedback

AtomicArmy

Hello, I recently finished a piece portraying the Russian T-90 tank and I was just wondering if I can have some feedback. I will greatly appreciate it! Also, it will help me create better pieces in the future.

I also created this using 3ds max, Zbrush and Photoshop. Rendered in Marmoset 2.

Bek

Looks okay. Your render has a lot of bloom and it's not a stunningly accurate T-90 (Barrel in particular is quite long and thin looking, and in general the real t-90 looks a lot bulkier). You might not be going for 99.9% accuracy but the barrel is a pretty big feature of the tank. Maybe spend more time doing the blockout in the future.

Maybe you could (could have?) spice up the texture by adding mud splatters or other types of situation wear as well.

AtomicArmy

Thank you! I'll go ahead and fix the model and update it with a newer version.

GrungyStudios

Cool model, pretty detailed. The bloom really takes away from what i can make of your spec/roughness maps. Agree with Bek about the barrel, could use some work. Overall this is a good piece and portfolio worthy for sure.

AtomicArmy

Thank you! Yeah I'm going work with the barrel and get rid of the bloom.

AtomicArmy

Okay, I went in 3ds max and pushed the barrel out some more, got rid of the bloom, and changed the lighting and texture around some. I also rendered out a wireframe.

Filcomet

Really cool texturing, it looks better without the bloom. But you have a visible seam in the barrel, you can fix it in texture or maybe hiding it rotating the barrel so the seam is facing the floor

AtomicArmy

Update: I went ahead a bulked up the model a little bit. and raised the turret a little.

@Filcomet Thank you! I'm glad you like the texture. Also, I fixed the seam on the barrel the specular map was too high.