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Ida_Jay
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Ida_Jay
polycounter lvl 5
Apr 2015
Hey I'm trying to model a concept weapon From district 9. It's still a WIP but I
feel as if I messed up somewhere.
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Brian "Panda" Choi
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Apr 2015
Is this the high poly model?
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Ida_Jay
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Apr 2015
No this is the Low Poly
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Brian "Panda" Choi
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Apr 2015
You're missing the trigger on the grip.
Also the barrel going in on the dorsal line of the gun seems more inset into the gun body in the concept.
Otherwise, looks like it's on its way!
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Ida_Jay
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Apr 2015
Thanks Dude, Yea I looked back over this and I re did the body and I'm re working the handle.
I noticed the issues with the barrel and I'm fixing it. So thank you. I'll post updates
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Also the barrel going in on the dorsal line of the gun seems more inset into the gun body in the concept.
Otherwise, looks like it's on its way!
I noticed the issues with the barrel and I'm fixing it. So thank you. I'll post updates