The legend of Zelda: Majora´s Mask
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Hi guys! this is my first post and i want to show you my latest work in 3D. This is a work for the school and i will appreciate comments and critiques 
hope you like it!
hope you like it!
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I compared your image to this one;
And made three areas of focus that stood out to me and detracted from the piece.
Stance
His stance is just very bland, if you study the reference image you'll notice he's in more of an action pose. His shoulder shifts forward while lifting the mask to his face. That action flows through his body and offsets his feat as thought he's leaning forward.
Level of Detail
So comparing the amount of detail in the hands to the rest of the character, the hands stick out like a sore thumb. Try to add more detail throughout the character to balance the details in the hand.
Eyes
Link's eyes in your piece are pretty scary, they make him appear extremely menacing. Combined with the Mask of Truth covering his face, he has an extremely sinister presence that doesn't speak to the character.
I think you should relax his eyebrows and play with the eye color a bit. Showing more contrast in his eyes may help, for example;