Trojan Support Vehicle (Fan art)

Veezen

Hi! Another personal work which I made. I will make lp model and maps but not now Hope you like it



@Edit
I made this based on concepts I found on the web - thanks to Forge World.

Kel-Shaded

Had to google what it was fan art of sorry lol, But i really like it, good job buddy

Veezen

TBH I don't know why I put "fan art" in topic name
Thanks for comment

Veezen

I'm back with this vehicle. Well, still WIP but I will finish it maybe this week. Need to add some dirt and stuff.

Veezen

Just finished this one:


Here is more:
http://veezen.pl/tsv.html

Ged

it seems to be lacking shadows or at least a shadow under the vehicle? other than that looks well done.

Kid.in.the.Dark

I feel like this tank lacks interest... you'd benefit more with a tank that suffered some war damage... it looks really clean to me still like it had just been on patrol all day and never got to witness a warzone.
Also the turntable throws me off a bit... How big is this tank? if it's supposed to be a bigger sized tank then the turn table's texture scale makes the tank look really small I'd say the size of a shoe almost... that's just based on how I can see it right now... no research on this tank but just from my eyes as a viewer.
Also I've never really been a fan of seeing a tank on concrete road... call me cliche I guess but this tank seems like it would also benefit visually if the turn table were something like desert floor... or even your concrete road with bits of sand on the edges or something...

I know most of this is just personal preference but I genuinely feel like this piece is lacking that little pop of interest. The model itself is good though, just the details now (Y)

Veezen

After I read some crtics (good and bad ;<) about this vehicle, I decided to make second version of this model with different texture set just to learn more texturing Thanks for comments.