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Sci-fi cartoony female WIP

Travis C
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Travis C polycounter lvl 8
So I'm currently trying to finish this model for a class. Some parts are in the blocking out phase. First time making a complete character from concept to finish. I would appreciate it if I could get a second pair of eyes to look at it in this phase, since my class is very small. Currently I'm working on the skirt.

any crit or comment is welcome, from improvements to the modeling to the design itself. If some part looks weird, please let me know!

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My roughly drawn concepting and character sheets:

sillouette sketching
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character sheet
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  • akiratang
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    akiratang polycounter lvl 11
    I love the concept. I think the face might need to be tweak a little to match the concept and capture the personality. But as its a WIP i think it will turn out fantastic once its textured and has a nice pose to it.
  • Travis C
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    Travis C polycounter lvl 8
    Quick update. Hipoly is done for the moment.
    changed her headband a little, worked alot of hardsurface detail to her skirt, and subdivided some other areas. Now working on low poly, baking, and hair.

    @akiratang thanks, yeah her face is kind of a miss in regards to following my concept. Though I'm hoping I can get the face more inline with the character after the rigging.


    I'm still sort of unsure how to manage the low poly of the skirt area, since it's kind of complex. I'm not sure if the cage of the belts should be just 1 piece or have the belts split into different pieces.

    haven't slept in like 2 days, so let me know if something is off!

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