Desmer's Workshop

Desmer

Hey guys!

I'm new here and would like to show you what I've been working on!

Criticism is appreciated, and I'd encourage it so I can make the changes to my items!


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Introducing my first item, for Rattletrap!

came quite a ways from this:

a couple other pictures here

Hope I get some replies, I would love to get this up! or maybe if someone is interested, help me put together a set!

Progress:

Baddcog

he looks pretty cool, would be good to see more angles. (gifs are fast and hard to see sides/back)

You missed the split/patch on his jaw though and it adds a lot of character. Plus it adds that asymetrical element.
I think his jaw could be thicker, all the ones in game are pretty beefy. Yours is so thin it doesn't stand out from the face much.

Original also has rust noise on it. You have nice edge highlights on the top rim, but the jaw just looks plain in contrast.

Desmer

Thanks for the feedback! definitely i'll add the split patch back, and rust it up a bit

edit: and done!