my firsttime doing enviroment modeling

Benmx

hi, after make some 3d models for games, i decided make a enviromental modeling this time just found this img, and i like the concept, to make a first approch to the enviromental art, below is my first attemp, still on progress,more updates in future incoming,

so any feedback is very welcome thanks !




the imagen reference

pangaea

I think this is too ambitious for you. There are some really annoying mistakes in your scene. For example you have paid little attention to the steps.

Just count the steps and you get big problems. You have 9 steps at the bottom and 4 steps at the top. Where there is actually 7 steps at the bottom and 9 steps at the top. The steps are also too wide. The steps should be half width.

You also have some useless topology in your scene for example does the barrel need that many triangle?

I think you should take a small part on the scene and focus on getting the details down, then move onto another small part of the scene.

As it currently stands it seems like you just thought hey there are some steps in this picture and added some steps without even looking at the picture to get the structure of the steps.

Benmx

pangaea wrote: »

I think this is too ambitious for you. There are some really annoying mistakes in your scene. For example you have paid little attention to the steps.

Just count the steps and you get big problems. You have 9 steps at the bottom and 4 steps at the top. Where there is actually 7 steps at the bottom and 9 steps at the top. The steps are also too wide. The steps should be half width.

You also have some useless topology in your scene for example does the barrel need that many triangle?

I think you should take a small part on the scene and focus on getting the details down, then move onto another small part of the scene.

As it currently stands it seems like you just thought hey there are some steps in this picture and added some steps without even looking at the picture to get the structure of the steps.

hey tanks! yes already make some changes, yes maybe is a complex scene, but i take this challenger, because i learn by myself, and the feedback is very important to me,
already make some changes below is a new screen shot

also need make some changes on the roof top


please anybody feel free to comment because i really want make this looks very good. also if have some suggestion on texturing feel free to comment.
thanks and best regards

Benmx

a little update


soon i will post a link to download, i really want share this with all the community.

billymcguffin

I can't see any of your images

Benmx

hi here a pic, i dont know why imgbox dont show the image, anyway feel free to comment, thanks! a link to download the scene on progress sooon.

KingKellogg

Keep it up!

Benmx

Thanks @kingkellog ! Really appreciate it, next week a link to share the scene

KingKellogg

No need to rush, take your time until you are happy with it!

Benmx

some little updates

Carabiner

Have you started getting things into a game engine yet? If I were you, I'd probably do that sooner rather than later, just so I could make sure that I'm making things in an efficient way. I put off that step when I first tried to do an environment, and then I realized too late that I was building my scene in a way that wasn't going to work very well to import into an engine.

Benmx

Hi carabiner, you are right i will start to port a game engine, unity maybe because i dont have acces to udk(i am on macosx) thanks by your comment really apreciate

WarrenM

UE4 runs on Mac. Just FYI...

Benmx

hey thanks @warrenM i will try it, thanks by the advice!

Benmx

just a little update, testing some textures and light render in maya, feedback is welcome.
regards.

fadox

Felt in love with the artwork, cant wait to see it in 3d.