Really nice! The draenei form is definitely there. And that render is amazing. What are you rendering on?
Just a few things I noticed. The armor parts around her neck seems very wobbly. The edges look clay-like. Maybe you could polish that up a bit more. Also the hair volume on her left seems a little too much, though that could just be me.
Great model and the lightning is really good too! The textures are a bit boring, but for a "cartoon'ey" look totally fine. Just the armor could use a little bit more attention. I hope i reach your level of modelling some day
I love the proportions and the face is simple and right where it should be (in my humble opinion).
on the other hand the armor could use some carving onto it. because that shoulder plate is just an empty space, that should be filled. and I'm talking really small detailed carvings,
not including big changes, because -like I said previously- the proportions are great.
love the face simple and pretty
proportions overall are spot-on and also interesting.
the empty space on the armor could use detailed carvings
like this here : http://borneoartifact.com/images/SH0168a.JPG
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Just a few things I noticed. The armor parts around her neck seems very wobbly. The edges look clay-like. Maybe you could polish that up a bit more. Also the hair volume on her left seems a little too much, though that could just be me.
@BakedCookie, I fixed her mouth. Now she looks more natural.
@TomGT, The render was made in Zbrush and the composition in photoshop.
on the other hand the armor could use some carving onto it. because that shoulder plate is just an empty space, that should be filled. and I'm talking really small detailed carvings,
not including big changes, because -like I said previously- the proportions are great.
proportions overall are spot-on and also interesting.
the empty space on the armor could use detailed carvings
like this here : http://borneoartifact.com/images/SH0168a.JPG
great job