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[UE4] Asteroid Mining Facility

PrimePriest
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PrimePriest polycounter lvl 3
Hello. I stumbled upon this concept on the web, and though it would be cool to create something similar in 3d.

Original concept by Gabriel Björk Stiernström
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https://www.artstation.com/artist/gabrielbjorkstiernstrom

I got excited about the planet in the background and tried to tackle it first. Then I realized it would be good idea to add at least some rough block-out.

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Despite my efforts the planet is still far from looking how I want it. Especially cloud map is unsatisfying. Also I'm excited to make some rocks! :)

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  • Lockewood
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    Lockewood polycounter lvl 6
    Looks like a solid start to me. You've captured the composition of the scene well, but I feel it lacks the sense of scale that the concept has. Hopefully that should start to come through once you've added in more detailing to the foreground.

    I think it would also benefit from moving the light source a bit more around to the front of the shot, so that you are facing more towards it.
    A: So that it matches the concept closer and B: because planets usually look at their most majestic when the light is hitting them at a glancing angle and diffracting through the atmosphere.
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    Should help your planet look less flat and a bit more interesting.

    Looking forward to seeing where you go with it though!
  • Soldier63
    subscribed! :)
    I love space scenes <3
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