Jeep (WIP)
Hi guys my first post here:
Just wanted to share a model I am working on my spare time , it´s kind a of mad max style Jeep, would like to gather some feedback from you guys before going onto detail, I´m quite worried about the scale in general ,the aspect of the wheels and the underneath part :S
This is just a personal project, I would like to have it polished to include it on my portfolio
My Idea is to have it textured in a couple weeks...
I´m also posting the concept with has been made from my friend makilolo , I hope you guys can give some feedback on this.
Thank you in advance
Just wanted to share a model I am working on my spare time , it´s kind a of mad max style Jeep, would like to gather some feedback from you guys before going onto detail, I´m quite worried about the scale in general ,the aspect of the wheels and the underneath part :S
This is just a personal project, I would like to have it polished to include it on my portfolio
My Idea is to have it textured in a couple weeks...
I´m also posting the concept with has been made from my friend makilolo , I hope you guys can give some feedback on this.
Thank you in advance
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I'm especially glad you took the gun off. It didnt make sense before. I was going to ask you how you expected anybody to shoot considering theres no where for them to stand.
The feeling i'm getting from this truck (the concept) is that it has plates of armor all around it. You sort of have that happening on the side, but the hood doesnt. If you could figure that out, I think you'd be on point. But as of now thats my only criticism.
Not pretty happy with the profile of the overall thing must figure out how to reposition some parts to get a better shape.
About the gun, yeah I think I´ll get rid of the ting just just because it means opening a hole on the roof and even start thinking about some interior parts.
Glad you like it
Thank you!
Since you were asking about proportions with the wheels/underside:
I think the rear tires being larger is cool. I think that, lookking at the top view..they could come in closer to the body a little bit. Having them out wider than the front tires is cool, but its a tad too far for my taste.
I think you could benefit from giving the vehicle a more aggressive stance. Drop the front end down a little bit/raise the rear. Will give a nice impression that the vehicle is rearing to pounce on you.
I think the driver side/passenger door windows are a little small. Maybe just having the bottom of the frame dropped to match the windshield would work better.
How is the plating on front of the front tires mounted to the vehicle? Right now it just looks like it floats.
Great Feedback thank you !! I think looks better now, the feeling that I get is that it´s a bit more realistic and less toy proportioned, The shape from the side get much better now that the front part it has sense with the rear one.
I´m not sure how to do the plating, on the concept it´s not very clear, I may use some of the mecanism from above the car, while respecting the 2d image.
Loved your Icicle shader
I little update on this, From the blocking I redid the front part and separate some of the parts, I also made it rounder. Still working on some parts like the machinegun (I recovered it) the tires etc...
C&C are welcome as always !