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John Ehresmann - Portfolio Building

John Ehresmann
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Heyyyyy everybody,

It's been a while since I've last posted anything on the forums. Last time I did, I got some pretty solid feedback, and have gone back to the drawing boards/have started to work on a new portfolio. It's been a lot of hard work, but I feel like I'm finally starting to hit a better place, and wanted to start sharing some of what I've got going right now.

As it stands, I know there's a bunch of work that needs to be done to what I'm about to post, but feel like it's at a place I can start trying to get some fresh eyes on it.

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Everything in here is being done by me from the ground up, and being done inside of CryEngine. As a whole it's been a hell of a learning experience, and I feel like I've come a lot further than where I was when I was posting stuff like the image below a few months ago.

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All feedback is welcome, and I'm pretty stoked to post updates as I make more progress.

~John

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  • Oskar Selin
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    Nice progress! I agree that you have come far in those months. The grass and rocks are great. Maybe you could break up the geometry on the tree-leaf-planes? Right now they look very flat and are so dense that everything except the trunk is hidden.
  • John Ehresmann
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    John Ehresmann polycounter lvl 4
    Nice progress! I agree that you have come far in those months. The grass and rocks are great. Maybe you could break up the geometry on the tree-leaf-planes? Right now they look very flat and are so dense that everything except the trunk is hidden.


    Sounds like a solid idea, I'll give that a go next time I go back to tweak on the trees this week. Thanks for the feedback, I'll post up an update when I start tweaking the trees some more, and let you know how it works out
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