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The Gift Shoes

chequeiq
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The Gift Shoes is a project of a man who creates shoes from computer pieces for a birthday gift

Title: The Gift Shoes
Software: 3ds Max , Vray , Photoshop
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  • allknighter
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    allknighter polycounter lvl 5
    Wow. This looks great:)
    What impressed me about this picture, is how much work youve put into making all the mess on that table!
    Good job:)

    Some pointers:
    -pokeballs are kinda shiny, it doesn't look like it is in this picture.. Also, I believe the button is a bit bigger?
    -love the minion, spongebob and pokeball, but you've placed them all together, indicating a sort of order, in this otherwise messy desk.
    - there's a lot of pencils scissors and artists tools, but few shoemaking tools.
    - crosses for each day on the calendar, to indicate the occation
    - what's that glowing red thing I'm the left corner? O.o
    - cut a bit from the left side. It looks like there's around 1 cm too much deadspace on that side, I think...

    Even further nitpicking:
    - who has such a small picture of their girl?
    - the angle of the glasses, makes it look like the person was supposed to sit on the side of that desk there. Cause when you take of your glasses its usually angles towards you or opposite from you.
    - a faint background outside the window would be nice.
  • Francois_K
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    Francois_K interpolator
    Also : The Don't Forget postits are exactly the same font. I doubt you would write the 100% same way twice.

    The tea-cup looks like the person just went from the kitchen and put an empty tea-cup on the table. There would be signs that the person has drunk from it.
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