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Hi everyone, I was working on this Drone for my hard serface class and finally I got something to show at Polycount.

i would love some pointers and critique

Thank you

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  • okang7942
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    You can see the turntable from the link below

    http://vimeo.com/119218706
  • Leinad
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    Leinad polycounter lvl 12
    This looks great, one small thing about the presentation. The sheet where there are 4 different viewing angels, the one in the bottom right corner bothers me. At first I was trying to visualize what part it was till I realized it's the same model but with a gradient applied. It seems a bit unnecessary since I don't notice what it adds to the overall presentation, if anything it presents initial confusion.

    Also the most recent image, the background is a bit too noisy for my taste. But this is more a case of personal preference.

    Overall, the model looks solid to me, great job!
  • samwoodart
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    samwoodart polycounter lvl 7
    I think this looks fantastic! I love the contrast of the orange accent, it makes a fantastic focal point. I feel like this would really pop with a little more specular highlights on the hard edges.
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