Character + pet project

Kamezis

Hi.
I will use this thread to help me to finish a personal project for my portfolio.
Just a character, with a gun, and his robot pet.

Every feedback are welcome.




+ Quick shape research

dimosM

Hey, it's looking really nice so far, however there are some things sticking out to me;
-Clavicle is a little too straight, not an S shape.
-Deltoids ; the front head is supposed to originate from the clavicle while the rear head seems a little too small for such a muscular guy.
-Triceps ; misconstruction of the common tendon which also leads to wrongly shaped heads, especially the lateral one.
-The back could use some more love in general ; there are some strange lines coming underneath the trapezius and i cant really see where they are going to the front.
-It's also a nice thing to break the symmetry to the abs.
That's all, i hope it's not too much and good luck

lotet

shoes are looking really wonky, they have some strange looking curves. heals should point up instead of straight.
this one is pretty extreme, but I think it proves my point
http://alterbrooklyn.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/hutchinson_black_2.jpg?w=300

Brian "Panda" Choi

Design question:

So, who is this character? What makes him wake up in the morning?

Kamezis

Thanks for all the feedback, i didn't expect that much.
So, i tried to rework some part according to dimosM and lotet, and i still looking for a cool shape for both, before really push details.

JadeEyePanda : i want him to be some mercenary, visiting some planet with his boy. I know his background need to be important to help me to stress out some design that match with his story, and i lost this in the road. Thank you for remind me this.

Kamezis

Here's some progress :

Kamezis

Retopo okay, i will put more work in the optimisation of the shoes.
Quick throw in marmoset to see how it's turn.

Kamezis

I started to bake the map, things goes slowly but surely !