[W.I.P] Tavor X95

Chicken Dip

Hey guys, so im working on a little something, hoping to get your opinion! Comment away guys!
So without further a due









And the initial textures.









Comment away!

Fridock

Looks really good, i like your edges. I see some bad smoothing tho on little details but not something that spoils the whole picture

Sammy101

Hey Tavor looks awesome. How long did the high poly take?

Chicken Dip

@ Fridock: Thanks for the comment, would you mind pointing out the smoothing errors? that way i can fix them up.

@ Sammy101: Thanks! To be honest i cant really say since i was not able to work on it solid. But i would have to say it took me about 7 days, around 2 to 3 hours a day tops.

Amsterdam Hilton Hotel

the modeling looks very clean, maybe double check the proportions though, this thing is built around STANAG mags and they aren't that fat

Chicken Dip

@ Amsterdam Hilton: Thanks for the comment, will look into the portions. I used the standard HK 30 round mag which seemed correct after i saw the vid.

Fridock

@Chicken Dip Here is what caught my eye, but as i think about it, it's almost nothing to fix here lol

http://i.imgur.com/pPCzm0T.jpg

Chicken Dip

Small Update:

Fixed the Magazine size, re-working the LP to bring down the Tri count.
Image update will soon follow.

Chicken Dip

Hey guys, a little update on the old gal, sorry took so long got caught up with work and haven't had much time. Anyways without further adur! here she is






I know there is still much to get done, let me know if you guys feel like i am on the right path and what other comments you feel like leaving! This is my first time trying to texture to impress.

Kaine123

the wear on the STANAG is backwards, the valleys would still be coated while the ridges would be more worn. Notice how the valleys aren't affected by wear.

Oniram

good execution on the modeling. i agree it does look a little too thick though.

pmiller001

This gun looks a little chunky and plastic right now.

Oniram

pmiller001 wrote: »

This gun looks a little chunky and plastic right now.

it is plastic :P

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/0/02/Micro-Tavor21-pic001.jpg

Chicken Dip

Im back with a little update, its been a bit unfortunately i haven't had much time to work on it.
Anyways here it is.







The flash hider, magazine and pistol grip have not been worked on. I am ready for any and all comments, I still have much to learn about texturing and will really appreciate your opinion. Thanks

Chicken Dip

So i have been working a bit on the weapon, i managed to texture the whole thing. Let me know what you guys think and what i can do to improve it!


















Thanks for your time! C&C like crazy!!

Un_dead

Again man, this has been cited multiple times, the magazine is far too thick to be a STANAG magazine. The model itself is actually really good, though you should brighten up some of the metal,unless it's painted. I'm talking particularly about the barrel, it just looks too black to me. The barrel on my G3 (admittedly a different rifle and manufacturer) was a lot brighter, similar in colour to what you have on the mag. If it is painted, I suggest you add in paint wear; the paint flakes off first, and then the underlying metal scratches.

Looking good though, keep it up

Chicken Dip

So s small update guys, i have fixed the mag as said by many, but i am having a small problem, I tried importing it into UE4 but my metal looks really weird, would you guys be able to help me?


Thanks!