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sasu665 polycounter lvl 4
Hi there!
I wanna show you my progress of making FENDER American Vintage '52 Telecaster:

wip1_zpsd9ec2127.jpg~original
wip2_zps99b29f6e.jpg~original

If you leave your opinion or tips in comments i will be very happy :)

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  • Drew++
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    Drew++ polycounter lvl 14
    Here's some crits. Main thing is maybe you should start a lower poly blockout mesh to quickly edit shapes and proportions before subdividing.

    This area is the first thing I noticed:
    FC1a8je.png
    tele1.jpg

    The pick guard isn't correctly shaped either.
    10.jpg

    Maybe soften out that edge too. It's a lot wider than you think. That does depend on if you're doing one with trim or not though.
    4223.0.original.jpg

    Hope these help :)
  • sasu665
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    sasu665 polycounter lvl 4
    Day-2:
    I've made knobs, some part of bridge and new pick guard....
    Drew ++
    thanks for help. Special for the pick guard image.

    day2wip1_zps608161e6.jpg~original
    day2wip2_zps71d5ec6b.jpg~original
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