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Teutonic Knight

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NinjaDragonKick polycounter lvl 4
Teutonic knight I did in Zbrush a few days ago, it was my first time making chain mail and also my first time using mircomesh so the chain mail probably could be done better but I think it turned out ok xD
Feed back always appreciated xD

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  • Shurkuris
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    Shurkuris polycounter lvl 3
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    (1) I feel like your Holy Cross statue is a little to "worn" out. If a craftsmen did chisel it, their should be some evidence of sharper edges (albeit a little worn), probably as you get closer to the base as the ground will protect it better from the elements.

    (2) Are you sculpting fur or grass for the shoulder pads/helmet? Feels like grass to me.

    (3) Grass should be thicker at the base than it's tip. (Unless your working off some reference material)

    (4) Clothing feels a little rigid, have you done a cloth simulation for him yet?

    (5) What reference are you using for the chain-mail design? Looks look someone took barb-wire and made that into a protective clothing.

    (6) Some PBS would do your Teutonic Knight better justice at this point I think.
  • NinjaDragonKick
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    NinjaDragonKick polycounter lvl 4
    Shurkuris wrote: »
    C&C

    (1) I feel like your Holy Cross statue is a little to "worn" out. If a craftsmen did chisel it, their should be some evidence of sharper edges (albeit a little worn), probably as you get closer to the base as the ground will protect it better from the elements.

    (2) Are you sculpting fur or grass for the shoulder pads/helmet? Feels like grass to me.

    (3) Grass should be thicker at the base than it's tip. (Unless your working off some reference material)

    (4) Clothing feels a little rigid, have you done a cloth simulation for him yet?

    (5) What reference are you using for the chain-mail design? Looks look someone took barb-wire and made that into a protective clothing.

    (6) Some PBS would do your Teutonic Knight better justice at this point I think.

    Thanks for your reply and feedback, ya the chainmail was the main thing i was worried about as it was my first time doing chain-mail and using mircomesh :/
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