looking for feedback on my toon style.

Meyitzo

Hey all,

So a few month ago I decided to start doing toon style stuff just to get away from my normal realistic texturing and was hoping to get feedback on how I can improve or just general feedback.

Here are 2 speed videos I made the other day.

chicken coop - [ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sA1HOxyS8QU"]chicken coop modeling and texturing - YouTube[/ame]
questboard - [ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r00uki3vcCk"]questboard - YouTube[/ame]

these assets are for a sort of farmville type game just for context.

Thanks

Mey.

Odow

2 things. Next time put picture, it's just like you when you hve to click link, people don't like that, people don'T like to watch 5min of video for nothing either. Just post picture of your wire frame and one of the asset textured, texture sheet if you want to. but not a speed modeling video.

I just fast foward on the time bar but cartoon#handpainted you should AVOID taking picture as a base for you texture It ruins the cartoon style. If you really want to go for the handpainting style, like Wow, Just DROP the picture you need to draw everything by yourself, push the light and the shadow. As for the modeling itself it's nice, maybe put some thickness on the roof. because it look pretty flat.