What is that dark sphere behinf her head ?
Also, pay attention to the space between her legs, right now it's barely there which makes it look undecided....kinda.
Plus, the sword is parallel to the shield and her body. You might wanna work on that, too.
@Silvarspark
Thank's a lot for your feedback! I hope it's more clear about eclipse from the second scetch and your advice about details of her pose is very useful for me. I'm going to fix it in the next step
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Also, pay attention to the space between her legs, right now it's barely there which makes it look undecided....kinda.
Plus, the sword is parallel to the shield and her body. You might wanna work on that, too.
Thank's a lot for your feedback! I hope it's more clear about eclipse from the second scetch and your advice about details of her pose is very useful for me. I'm going to fix it in the next step