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Cartoon octopus

strash07
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I recently made this simple character so I thought I will put it here for some feedback.

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  • Pablorom12
    I like it... I should work the texture a little bit more but nice work
  • Jean-Pascal
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    Jean-Pascal polycounter lvl 5
    Hey strash!
    On a technical level, I have 2 critisms to make:

    • You would probably want to reduce the amount of polygon at the top of the head. The polygons you'll save could then be used to create a proper eye mask that would allow for better facial deformation.
    • I don't think that having separate UVs for each tentacle is necessary. Right now they seem to be pretty much the same, so you could simple copy them and save a lot of uv space. Then you'll be able to scale up all your remaining UVs and have better quality texture.


    Keep it up! :)
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