[Riot Art Contest] - Elise Cryptanite
SO! I decided to do a new costume for Elise. She is my favourite character (it was either her or Riven) but since i quite like the goth/alternative fashion i decided to do Elise because i feel like she appeals to the darker side of my personality (horror/spiders etc etc). So i hope you enjoy my scribbles and WIP and finished piece! 
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Her face is a bit stylized - did you mean to?
I would remove the little locks on her legs. Her belly tattoos aren't necessary. I feel like her head can be smaller. And her lower arms are too straight - bend them a little bit.
Hope you don't mind this cristicism
For her face i tried to make it as stylised as i could to try and closely fit the League of Legends art style. so long as it looks good right? :O
yeah i was looking at both the locks and the belly tattoos with skepticism myself and your critique has made me definitely consider removing them because they dont really hold a place in the design. so thank you for that!
Elise has rim lighting so maybe darken her a bit or give her a bright outline at fitting places.
The spiders can be pushed back a little. I think a soft color layer that fits the surroundings would do. Also maybe work on cast shadows for the spiders. They look like they're floating.
Maybe also scale down or remove the spiders on the right side.
Keep it up. The spiders look amazing, btw.
I love the color scheme in the piece! and the extra mile taken in the extra character!
The atmosphere in the background is groovy
If I were to leave a suggestion, I would put a contrast between the two separate characters. The colors sorta muddle together and they both get a little lost where they intersect.
Maybe another color comp for the background? Don't find this so fitting with her colors.
okay i guess im nearing the end now. Getting to that point where you just gotta leave something alone. Hope you guys like