Hair saloon wall picture 2D/3D

MrCreator

Hello people,

I have made a picture that is going to be used in a hair saloon as a big wall picture, over one whole wall. I made a female with her hair in ZBrush, rendered her and did everything else in Photoshop. I consider this finished, could anyone give me any comments on it? And which version is better - 1 or 2?

Version 1



Version 2

huffer

You could make the hair shinier so it catches some cool highlights, like this. Maybe on the typograhy part, avoid excesive tracking, very tight or very wide, it kind of pops out in a not so appealing way.

Teabox

Version 1 isn't loading for me, but by looking at version 2, Huffer is right, some highlights in the hair would help it pop, similarly, i'd consider rendering some more colour into her skin, she's very pink and feels a bit dead.

She needs more of a paintover because she really doesn't seem to fit with the style of the rest of the image.


Just my opinion, I hope that you can find some of it useful.