Home 3D Art Showcase & Critiques

College Project: 4 Objects.

As part of a college brief I was given the task to create 4 objects:

- a melee weapon
- a long range weapon
- an item of clothing
- an object from home.

Concepts.

Melee Weapon: Sword.
tumblr_nfgjqxvzhv1qfpaxto1_1280.jpg

Long Range Weapon: Bow.
tumblr_nfgjqxvzhv1qfpaxto4_1280.jpg

Item of Clothing: Pin Up Doll Dress.
tumblr_nfgjqxvzhv1qfpaxto2_1280.jpg

Item From Home: Water Feature.
tumblr_nfgjqxvzhv1qfpaxto3_1280.jpg

Replies

  • chloemegan
    Finished models.

    Melee Sword.
    [SKETCHFAB]4e3b4980b3a640f780484a105f664a89[/SKETCHFAB]

    Bow.
    [SKETCHFAB]e9b2c6cace9f4c8ab86551f4b0ea45d0[/SKETCHFAB]

    Pin Up Doll Dress.
    [SKETCHFAB]a6947b8999f14802b5d8f084294b6d0c[/SKETCHFAB]

    Water Feature.
    [SKETCHFAB]7d69cbd78a7e47008edff328a78c7073[/SKETCHFAB]D
  • Brian "Panda" Choi
    Offline / Send Message
    Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range
    Do you have texture flats we can look at?

    Your ress need texture edge spacing/buffer. It's very clear on the edges that there's black artifacting going on. You need to bleed the texture out of the UV boundaries a bit to correct for this.

    The fountain is suffering the same issue with the stone from your Crash Bandicoot VG Remix model. It's just noise slapped onto a surface, with no accounting for wetness or where dust might fall, or even moss may build up. It looks lazy, and it has the opportunity for more time to be put into it.

    This is a serious word of warning, and you have time to fix this early in school. Just doing your HW will not be enough to count as a portfolio. You really need to spend time on your own to polish your assets.
Sign In or Register to comment.